Rockville High School
Evaluations for 2002-2003
Date:7/10/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "Sports Injuries"
Status: Re-submit
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OVERALL There was no voice-over on your tape. We just have the sound bites and stand-up. Please double check your tapes on a separate VHS machine before submitting. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "Violence in High School"
Status: Re-submit
Length:
DELIVERY (How is the voice used to tell the story [pitch, tone, diction]):
INTERVIEWS (Sound bites interesting and did they enhance the story?):
ORIGINALITY (Story creative, unique, statewide appeal?):
WRITING (Report written clearly, creatively, & grammatically correct?):
VIDEO (Pix illustrated the story? Tri-pod used, lighting, composition?):
AUDIO (Clarity, natural sound, enhance the story?):
EDITING(Pictures and sound used in the proper sequence to tell a story? Pictures match the script?):
OVERALL(All the elements used to tell an interesting story for the viewer?): There is no voice-over recorded on this tape. There is only the natural sound, sound bites and SIG-out. Please fix and re-submit. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "The GAPP Program"
Status: Re-submit
Length: :51
DELIVERY: Good delivery. Be careful when doing your SIG-out. Don't say "on location…" this would be for a live segment, please use "from Vernon, this is…..reporting".
INTERVIEWS: Good choices
ORIGINALITY: Good
WRITING: Good
VIDEO: More b-roll is needed in your story. Make sure to get plenty of medium and close-up images. This will help in editing. Please don't use staged shots.
AUDIO: Good
EDITING:
OVERALL More b-roll is needed to support your script. On a side note, please use clean tape stock without any out takes when submitted your stories. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "Fire Safety Day"
Status: Re-submit
Length:
DELIVERY (How is the voice used to tell the story [pitch, tone, diction]):
INTERVIEWS (Sound bites interesting and did they enhance the story?):
ORIGINALITY (Story creative, unique, statewide appeal?):
WRITING (Report written clearly, creatively, & grammatically correct?):
VIDEO (Pix illustrated the story? Tri-pod used, lighting, composition?):
AUDIO (Clarity, natural sound, enhance the story?):
EDITING(Pictures and sound used in the proper sequence to tell a story? Pictures match the script?):
OVERALL(All the elements used to tell an interesting story for the viewer?): There is no voice-over recorded on this tape. There is only the natural sound, sound bites and SIG-out. Please fix and re-submit. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: What the Name of your story????
Status: Re-submit
Length: :60
DELIVERY: Good
INTERVIEWS: A second interview is needed. How about someone from the rival school?
ORIGINALITY: What is the focus of your story. Is the rivalry sports or scholastic or both?
WRITING: Once you have a focus, remember to answer the 5 W's and H: Who, What, When, Where, Why and How.
VIDEO: More b-roll to support your script. If this is a sport rival then more sports shots.
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EDITING:
OVERALL We need the Student News stories to be exactly :50 seconds from the moment the voice-over begins to the end of the stand-up. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "Hurricanes"
Status: Re-submit
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OVERALL: There was nothing on this tape! Please double check your dubs on a VHS machine separate from your editing bay before submitting. Thank you.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "Self Expression"
Status: "Re-submit"
Length: 1:09
DELIVERY: Good delivery.
INTERVIEWS:
ORIGINALITY: Your story needs to be narrowed down to one focus with state wide appeal. What is the "hook" of your story? We have enclosed the "How To" manual to help when you are thinking of story ideas.
WRITING: Once you have the premise of your story, then answer the 5W's and H; Who, What, When, Where, Why and How.
VIDEO: More b-roll is needed with a variation in your images. Get plenty of medium and close-ups to help support your script and make editing easier.
AUDIO: low and inconsistent.
EDITING:
OVERALL:
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "CT. Driving Age"
Status: Re-submit
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OVERALL: There is no voice-over recorded on this tape. There is only the natural sound, sound bites and SIG-out. Please fix and re-submit. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "Self Expression"
Status: Resubmit
Length: :45
DELIVERY: Good voice-over delivery.
INTERVIEWS: Good. Be careful where you cut your sound bites. They need to be a clean cut.
ORIGINALITY:
WRITING:
VIDEO: More b-roll is needed to match your script. The images should match the script. IE: instead of empty hallways, use shots of the halls filled with students. Please use a tri-pod at all times!
AUDIO: Your voice-over and sound bites are on inconsistent levels – be careful when recording.
EDITING: More variation in your shots will help with the editing. Make sure to get plenty of medium and close-ups.
OVERALL The stories need to be exactly :50 seconds from the moment the voice-over begins to the end of the stand-up with an additional :5 second pad at both ends. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "High School Sports Injuries"
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OVERALL: There is no voice-over recorded on this tape. There is only the natural sound, sound bites and SIG-out. Please fix and re-submit. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "High School Opening Times"
Status: Re-submit
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OVERALL: There is no voice-over recorded on this tape. There is only the natural sound, sound bites and SIG-out. Please fix and re-submit. Thanks.
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Date:7/3/03
School: Rockville High School
Town: Vernon
Slug: "Safety Day"
Status: Re-submit
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OVERALL: There is no voice-over recorded on this tape. There is only the natural sound, sound bites and SIG-out. Please fix and re-submit. Thanks.
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