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Griswold High School

Date posted:2/25/04
School: Griswold High School
Town: Griswold
Slug: "Cleaning up the Community"
Status: Re-submit
Length: :55

DELIVERY (How is the voice used to tell the story [pitch, tone, diction]): Good voice over delivery and nice job on your stand-up. Please see overall note on the way to wrap-up the story.

INTERVIEWS (Sound bites interesting and did they enhance the story?): Good choices for interview subjects and sound bites.

ORIGINALITY (Story creative, unique, statewide appeal?): Good community story with statewide appeal.

WRITING (Report written clearly, creatively, & grammatically correct?): Nice job writing into your sound bites. Remember to answer all the 5 W's & H: Who, What , When, Where, Why and How. We were wondering when this took place? Otherwise nice job getting the answers to this questions through your voice over and sound bites.

VIDEO (Pix illustrated the story? Tri-pod used, lighting, composition?): Good framing and variation on your shots.

AUDIO (Clarity, natural sound, enhance the story?): Good use of nat sound

EDITING(Pictures and sound used in the proper sequence to tell a story? Pictures match the script?): Nice job matching images to footage.

OVERALL(All the elements used to tell an interesting story for the viewer?): This will need to be :50 seconds in length. We time from the beginning of the voice-over to the end of the voice-over/stand-up. Also, do not mention your are reporting for "Fox 61 News", wrap up your story with "I'm ___Name___ reporting from___town____." We will insert a wrapper around the story which will tagged it as a Fox 61 and WB 20 Student News story. This is very important as we now air on WB 20 WTXX-TV. This is a well done story and deserves one more trip to the edit bay to cut down to the required time of :50.

PS: On the Affidavit it list only Rob Maynard as the person for the story, yet on the story it mentions someone else on camera. We will need all the names of the students who helped. Thanks.