Granby Memorial Middle School
Evaluations for 2002-2003
Date:7/10/03
School: Granby Memorial Middle School
Town: Granby
Slug: "Granby Ambulance Association"
Status: Broadcast (L)
Length: :50
DELIVERY: Good delivery on your voice over. Creative ending stand-up.
INTERVIEWS: Good choices. Your first interview would be better placed within your story and not as an opening sequence.
ORIGINALITY: Good community story
WRITING: Good job writing into your sound bite and covering the facts of your story.
VIDEO: Good selection of images. Be sure to get plenty of medium and close-up images. The close-ups will help in your editing and with the pacing.
AUDIO: Good job getting clear sound bites from your interviews. Suggestion: natural sound is needed under your voice-over to support the action that is taking place in the images.
EDITING: See video, audio and overall.
OVERALL: Try not to start your story with the interview as your beginning pad. Put the sound bites with in your story. Begin with video and voice-over.
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