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Crosby High School
March 20, 2008
Date posted: March 20, 2008
School: Crosby High School
Town: Waterbury
Slug: "Ziggy the Patriot"
Status: Broadcast
Length: 50
DELIVERY: Good clear delivery. Nice job doing the stand up with Ziggy in the background.
INTERVIEWS: Very good. Nice job getting emotional bites.
ORIGINALITY: Excellent.
WRITING: Very well written. Nice introduction to the story. Excellent job answering why Ziggy does this.
VIDEO: Great shots of Ziggy in action. Nice work including his vehicle.
AUDIO: Great job using natural sound. Good consistant levels through out.
EDITING: Nicely done.
OVERALL: Very good story.
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Date posted: March 14, 2008
School: Crosby High School
Town: Waterbury
Slug: "Rifle Team"
Status: Broadcast
Length: 50 (use some pad at beginning)
DELIVERY: Excellent. Great energy and inflection.
INTERVIEWS: Good person to interview with informative sound bites.
ORIGINALITY: Very unique program.
WRITING: Very good. Nice job setting up the story and explaining the program and its benefits.
VIDEO: Good footage of the program in action. Nice use of establishing shots for the interview.
AUDIO: Nice use of natural sound. The level dropped low on the interview. Try to keep the voiceover and interviews at consistant levels.
EDITING: Well edited.
OVERALL: Nice work.
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Date posted: March 14, 2008
School: Crosby High School
Town: Waterbury
Slug: "Student Athlete "
Status: Broadcast
Length: 50 (use pad at beginning)
DELIVERY: Great. Nice job using the stand up as a bridge. Really worked nicely.
INTERVIEWS: Good sound bites. Added to the story. Nicely framed shots.
ORIGINALITY: Great youth leadership story.
WRITING: Very well written. Nice job telling his accomplishments and future plans.
VIDEO: Good composition and lighting. Nice action shots. Some tight shots would have benefited the story. Nice job getting the classroom shot.
AUDIO: Nice use of natural sound. Clear and crisp audio levels.
EDITING: Nicely done.
OVERALL: Good job!
***********2006-2007 Evaluations***********
Date posted: April 20, 2007
School: Crosby High School
Town: Canterbury
Slug: "L.A.M."
Status: Broadcast
Length: 50
DELIVERY: Great job. Reporter added emotion to the story.
INTERVIEWS: There was only a short sound bite from the woman suffering from L.A.M. An interview with one of her students would have added to the story.
ORIGINALITY: Good story choice.
WRITING: Good but the story would have been stronger if the writing had been a little more focused. "Days like these make her think of brighter days" was a good line but didn't go with story since you are talking about her being positive and overcoming her problem.
VIDEO: Good action shots of her teaching. Nice job getting a variety of shots. The shots in her living room were very dark.
AUDIO: Good. It would have added to the story to have natural sound during the basketball shots.
EDITING: No issues. The story flowed well.
OVERALL: Great topic. Nice job getting a lot of shots. Next time work on the story organization.
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